W.A.L.T - retell stories in our own words.
- Organise our writing with a clear beginning, middle and end.
- Use google apps for online writing.
Sean was the biggest kid in the Stoneybrook neighbourhood. He was so strong that he could lift a bus WITH HIS BARE HANDS!! You might be thinking he is a hero because he is so strong, but he was actually a big fat bully. One day he shook a bus and the kids fell out. He hung Arthur Johnson a kid with ginger hair with one hand by his leg.’Well if it isn't Arthur Johnson the nerdy kid, have you got any nuggets for me today little nerd?”Then a new kid called big Steve, he was even bigger then Sean and please, believe me Sean was big.
Steve walked up behind Sean and said ‘’Big Steve smells chicken nuggets, Big Steve wants the chicken nuggets’’. Sean then gulped down the chicken nuggets before Big Steve could steal them. Suddenly Big Steve reached into his bag and pulled out a paint can, pink was the colour of this peculiar can, ‘’ my bad’’he said sarcastically. The uniforms were green but Sean's had turned pink because Big Steve tipped it on him and then the kids started to laugh and Big Steve said what are you silly little kids laughing at, you better watch out or you will be next.
The normal sized kids were sick of getting bullied by Sean now there was another big kid so they made a plan. The plan was to order some super inflatable chicken nuggets. One second later the super inflatable chicken nuggets truck arrived. They gobbled the whole box of nuggets down. For that reason the two bullies got big and big and bigger about as big as a Blue Whale that had been blown up. Fleur, Clark, Arthur and Lewis pushed the bullies up into the air. Sean and Big Steve both flew up out of the earth. Fleur, Clark, Arthur and Lewis were having so much fun watching Big Steve and Sean blow up into the air. The bullies flew up, up and up, straight up into the air. They were arguing for a little while. “ the only way to get down from here is to help each other, we have to pop.” Suddenly a satellite came racing through the air and the boys came flying towards it. “POP” was the only sound that you heard, oh and the motor of the satellite. They flew back to earth and became normal sized kids again. And they became friends. Everything was fine in Stoneybrook until big Stewart came along.
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