Friday, November 3, 2017

the crazy lawnmower machine

Runaway Robot Rampage – Complete story animated video from Ministry of Education on Vimeo.Goal: Retell stories in my own words Always put capital letters and full stops in the right place There was a boy and his name was Hemi. One day his dad asked him to mow the lawns or no pocket money. That day Hemi thought there was a better way to mow the lawns. So he went in the garage and found his dad’s nose hair remover. He also got four old steak knives, a few guitar strings, a laser and a old computer. He stayed up all night building it he failed a couple of time’s. To do it but he did it all night. By morning it was ready to go. He wheeled it into the backyard and he took the sheet off it. He grabbed its remote control and then he typed in mower start.”Boop” went the starting button on the control. Then he had a little nap and then he heard a whole crowd scream. Hemi went to go see what everyone was screaming about. And Hemi saw his crazy lawn mower machine has gone crazy it’s trying to shave all off the buildings Hemi said to himself that I must not have made it properly. Then the robot was on his way to town and Hemi heard lots of screams and he could tell it was already there. Inside Hemi knew what he had to do he ran to town with another laser and it saw the laser and started to chase Hemi dun dun duh. Finally said Hemi the robot lawn mower was coming home and then Hemi stayed up all night again fixing it. When his dad told him that he had to go mow the lawns Hemi actually stayed awake and the mower went crazy so Hemi got the laser and said I am actually going to be a good boy and mow the lawns myself. So I get more pocket money I am actually going to mow the neighbor's lawns and I will have enough money to buy as much chocolate and lollies as I want. I better start by asking the neighbours if he could mow their lawns, especially Mrs Laws lawns, her lawns really need to be mowed.

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